Warbanana's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Abyssal]

In the dark and things comming out.

Dam man.. When I was little I had an imagination that totally scares me to the point of having difficulties in sleeping. One of them were *exactly* that: floating monsters in the complete dark, I remember spending hours staring into the dark, making sure everything's just my imagination. This, is the masterpiece of surreal horror.

Though I've never experienced a real hullucination before. The worst I had was when I woke up once to the sound of a huge group of shouting people *it seriously sounded like a medevil war was going on*, just to realise it is dead in the night and no one is around. Never happened again.

Scythemantis responds:

You're lucky, I spent much of my childhood sick with fever and would see bizarre stuff indistinguishable from reality, long hands coming out of my dressers or the walls oozing and stuff :0

[Experiments on Alvin]

.... Sorry had to say something....

I dont think this animation was up to a standard that you even expected yourself. Im sure you have worked hard on it but there are some things that really made my cursor float over the [x] .
The sound was one of the issues, there was too much "speaking right into the mic", which caused the voices to sound too "ruffled". Some of the graphics seemed to be rushed. In some cases it makes me think that this is more or less rushed however it didn't ruin the style, which was quite original.
I hope you would be able to florish on your animation/drawing skills. And try not to rush since some of the animations that didn't even reach the top 20's took around 1-2 months to create.
That is all.

SandViper responds:

i started this movie about 2 months after getting flash which is y the sound is bad (crap mic) and why the animation gets better towards the end. it was never my intention to put it on newgrounds but i did because i wanted to see how it would do. thanks anyway though